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The Derp of the Stars (The Officially Unofficial Comic)

Post by Mr.Weasel » Fri Sep 02, 2011 1:54 am

Here is the thread where I will post my MS Paint comics I make...a comedic endeavor, no harm will ever be intended with any of them. Just trying to make you smile. Now please enjoy my silliness.

New posts will be made regularly in this thread with new strips, I will try to get at least a couple per week, so let's see how it goes.
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Post by Hari Seldon » Sat Sep 03, 2011 3:05 am

I really like the first strip Zuul Male's 3rd expression because it reminds me of Aku from Samurai Jack. :)

You're effective with the minimalist expressions in every strip, even for the more non-humanoid Morrigi. And the spiraly arms in the 3rd strip 4th panel were a cool way to draw the expression.

Also, :D the first strip was even cooler for me once I remembered The Adventures of Lil Cthulhu (youtube).

I noticed that all of your strips have the format that there are no plot twists until the last panel. This was fine for strip 1 and strip 2, but strip 3 might have been improved if there was an action, twist, or whatever you think it would be called after panel 4. Maybe the Morrigi in the third strip could have tried to glamor themselves up to attract the Siren-glamor's interest, then been turned on when the she effortlessly resisted 8). See the SotS ][ Lore page, Race: Morrigi thread, Morrigi Psionics: Glamour, Terror and Resistance post. So keep that alternative strip format in mind? :thumbsup:

Nitpick: I would have put armor on the glamour of a Female Morrigi since also in the same post, Erinys posted about glamor and it works, that the Morrigi often still have wings on their glamor regardless of the race the glamor is effecting. And the Suul'ka are covered in armor/spacesuit, so their glamor ...
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Post by Mr.Weasel » Sun Sep 04, 2011 12:46 am

Glad you are getting a good laugh out of these sir :P and that you like how they look...tried to keep thing simple but stylish.
Never saw that cthulu thing there before...disturbingly cute XD

Well the problem with the third strip is that it was getting physically too long...I knew that I was getting near the photobucket limit and I still managed to hit it....all of these should be 600PX wide, but photobucket shrunk the last one...another panel may have worked a bit better...but maybe I can use the glamour thing later on
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Post by Illanair » Sun Sep 04, 2011 3:44 pm

I approve highly of the Heavy comic :insane:
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Post by nighthaunt » Fri Sep 09, 2011 7:00 pm

Loving the humour - reminds us not to take everything so seriously - and the Sul-Ka expressions just make me picture a giant fat frog - which is a good thing :thumbsup:
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Post by Mr.Weasel » Thu Sep 22, 2011 11:56 pm

Again guys, glad this is giving you a few good laughs!
I could not resist the heavy one I admit... :P

I want to apologize for my general lack of updates, classes have been busy this semester.

But here, you can enjoy a preview of the Zuul Greatfather varient, the Glutton:

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Post by U.E.D.C. » Tue Oct 25, 2011 1:41 am

That just made my day :thumbsup:
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Post by Mr.Weasel » Tue Oct 25, 2011 3:03 am

Oh dur I have been neglecting this thread amidst midterms!

Fear not for this is a MUSICAL INTERLUDE!!!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UHOaxfj5TdY
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Post by Talguy 21 » Sat Jun 02, 2012 12:59 am

Sweet comics. There must be more! They are too hilarious!

Unless deh IRLs or (forbid) lack of intrest (*gasp*) are stopping it, then by all means.
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Post by Mr.Weasel » Sun Jun 03, 2012 3:03 am

The comics have stopped for the most part because I cannot run SotS II on my laptop and updating my drivers to try to run SotS II made SotS Prime no longer run properly, so I am sad :C
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